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雅思写作高技巧攻略
2020-08-21 | 编辑 :y

  雅思写作高技巧攻略,开头对于雅思大作文的写作来说非常重要,因为正是开头对整篇雅思文章起到的一个提纲契领的作用,会给考官留下最初的印象,如果这个印象好的话,就会引起考官继续关注接下来的内容的兴趣。

  很多雅思考官自己都讲过,他们最在乎的就是作文的第一段,因为通过首段建立的起的第一印象,他们会基本确定你的分数段。那么之后的文章,你写的再好,也是只在这个分数段里的上下浮动而已。一起来看看常见的4种导入方法吧。

  1. 采用媒体报道引出话题,把问题呈现在读者面前,引起读者思考。

  例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.(中山大学最近做的一个研究表明,在过去五年里,吸烟人数急剧上升。研究结果同时显示,吸烟导致的疾病发病率也急剧增长。因此,禁烟成为一个热点话题。)这个开头通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发读者思考。

  2. 引起读者兴趣的话题。

  例如在写关于体罚的话题文章时,采用这样一个开头:It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father  Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.(据报道,在父亲节那天,珠海有个小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的证据也显示,经常遭父母或老师虐待的小孩往往比较内向、悲观、冷漠甚至厌世。近来,关于是否应该废除体罚出现了一场激烈的争论,老师、家长和专家各执一词。)当读者看到这个话题时产生了浓厚的兴趣进而引起了对这件事情的思考。

雅思写作高技巧攻略

  3. 呈现该话题正反方的观点。

  观察观点类题目的特征,我们不难发现,此类题型的特征是题目有且只有一个观点。

  而题目要求我们回答的是“同意”或“不同意”这个观点。所以只要确定好我们的态度,在开头段表达出来即可。

  举个例子:Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

  ●agree:根据“背景句+直接转述题目+个人观点”的公式

  These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. (直接转述题目) Personally, I agree with this idea. (个人观点)

  ●disagree:用“although”的让步状语从句进行改写

  These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities. (背景句) Although some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health, (although +直接转述题目) personally, I do not agree with this idea. (个人观点)

  在开头提出两种不同的观点,不同的读者可以根据自己对问题的看法进行思考,从而引发读者的探究心理,进一步思考这个问题从而得出结论。


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