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      雅思写作中连接词的正确使用方式

　　大家在雅思写作中可以通过分析逻辑关系，使用相应连接词，将两个独立的句子连接起来。

　　表结果therefore

　　原句:

　　Some ex-prisoners cannot be reintegrated in society for their lack of skills.

　　一些前囚犯由于缺乏技能难以重新融入社会。

　　These ex-prisoners repeatedly commit crimes.

　　这些前囚犯重复犯罪行为

　　提升:

　　Some ex-prisoners cannot be reintegrated in society for their lack of skills and therefore repeatedly commit crimes.

　　一些囚犯由于缺乏技能难以重新融入社会，因而重复犯罪行为。

　　表比较as

　　原句:

　　Tourists are motivated to pay to visit tourist attractions.

　　旅客有动力去旅游景点。

　　Local dwellers are less motivated to visit tourist attractions.

　　当地人没有动力去旅游景点。

　　提升:

　　Local dwellers are less motivated to spend the same amount of money on visiting these tourist attractions as the tourists are.

　　当地人没有游客那么有动力花同样的钱到（当地）旅游景点。

　　表原因due to the fact that

　　原句:

　　Local citizens are less interested in local museums and historical sites.

　　当地居民对当地的博物馆和历史景点没那么感兴趣。

　　Visitors from other places far outnumber the local counterparts.

　　外地游客比当地游客多。

　　提升:

　　Due to the fact that local citizens are less interested in the local museums and historical sites, the visitors from other places far outnumber the local counterparts.

　　因为当地人对当地的博物馆和历史景点没那么感兴趣，所以外地旅客远远超过当地旅客。