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　　雅思写作高分范文模板：犯罪话题，下面这篇犯罪话题的范文，来自2018年3月3号的雅思写作考题。小编帮大家把一些好的词汇搭配和加分词汇用红笔做了标记。

　　2018-3-3雅思写作考题：

In many countries, prison is the common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with better education so that they will not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

　　参考范文：

　　All people hope to live in a secure society, but crimes seem to exist throughout the world. Some people think that to address this problem, what we need is better education for people instead of punishment for criminals. In my point of view, both are essential in the battle against crimes.

　　There is no denying that sending lawbreakers to prison can contribute to maintaining public security and stability, especially for those who are convicted ofgrave crimes. After being deprived of freedom, the criminals would reflect on their behavior and learn a lesson from it, which can effectively prevent them from committing crimes again. The punishment can also have deterrent effects on those potential criminals, who would consider the consequences of violating the law and give up their evil intentions.

　　However, imprisonment may not achieve the desired result and no matter how serious the penalty is, it seems unlikely to eliminate crimes. A large number of people perpetrate crimes because they have little knowledge about the law or basic skills for earning a living. Therefore, the first step is for the general public to receive more education and enhance their awareness of the law. Also, in some cases, if disadvantaged groups could learn some practical skills in school, they would be more likely to support themselves independently and become law-abiding citizens rather than choose to rob or steal.

　　To summarize, multiple methods are needed to reduce the crime rate. Only by the combination of punishing perpetrators and educating the general public can we build a safe and stable society.

　　通过这样一篇范文，我们是不是又学到了很多犯罪话题的词汇？以上两种方法（词汇表+范文）相结合，我们就可以在短期内迅速扩充各种话题的词汇量。

　　当你在写这些中文素材的时候，你会去动脑筋组织语言，去思考句子的成分，在脑子里面搜索自己熟悉的句式。你在这其中所培养的语感，正是写作必备的一种能力。