思路点拨

　　thread of thought

　　可以选择一种现场表演，比较推荐流行演唱会pop music concert或者小众的管弦乐表演orchestra performance，展开相关的细节详细描述——如what, why，着重放大这个现场表演对你的影响和感受。通过感受的描述，展示高级表达的使用，达到7.0 lexical resource的标准。

　　Sample answer

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　　引入Introduction　Well, many people might choose to talk about music concerts held by famous pop stars cos, after all, they have a huge following. However, I’m an exception. Personally, I prefer watching classical music concerts to pop music performance.  So I might as well elaborate on such an experience.

　　Language bits

　　have a huge following 非常受欢迎，热捧，粉丝很多

　　sb./sth. was an exception 某人/某事是一个例外

　　might as well/may as well 不妨

　　elaborate on 详细阐述，描述

　　02

　　回答what the performance

　　was and when it happened　　One classical music concert that was etched in my memory would be the Concerto of Beethoven Musical Works featuring a galaxy of musical talents showcasing their virtuosity in the instruments they play. And if I remember correctly, this happened, probably, a year ago. I could still remember clearly with full detail the moment when the curtain was lifted. The whole orchestra came into full view of the audience. The ladies wore long and elegant dresses that showed their artistic tastes while their male counterparts were dressed in tuxedo. They first bowed to the audience before seating themselves in their assignment spots. Then the lights on the ceiling grew dim and a hush fell over the crowd. After a brief moment, musical notes flew through all the instruments held by those musicians. The notes rose and fell as the pieces progressed. They were so melodious that the audience were transported to a world of beautiful music, leaving their everyday stress behind. The flat pace of the piano, the sudden pause, the crescendo, all these kept the audience enchanted. Also, the musicians were immersed in their performance. Each of them played with incredible accuracy. The highlight arrived when the conductor invited the audience to clap along with the musical piece of John Strauss. The cheerful sounds filled the air and echoed throughout the hall. Finally, it ended with all these outstanding musicians taking their bows to the audience.

　　Language bits

　　sth. was etched in my memory  我深刻地记住了某些东西

　　feature sb./sth. 有......特写，特征是......

　　a galaxy of 指的是一群有共同/相似特征，爱好等的人，如: a galaxy of musical talents

　　showcase v.展示

　　Virtuoso 表示演奏等方面技艺精湛的

　　showcase one’s virtuosity 展示某人的精湛技艺

　　sth. come into full view 某物一览无余,看得清清楚楚

　　be dressed in tuxedo 穿着燕尾服

　　A hush fell over the crowd. 人群突然静了下来，鸦雀无声

　　the lights grew dim 灯光暗了下来

　　rise and fall 起起伏伏，尤其是指音调，节奏等的起伏

　　sth. progress 某事进行

　　be melodious 旋律优美的

　　sb. be transported to 某人被带入了......情境，类似中文的“穿越”

　　leave everyday stress behind 抛弃日常的压力，烦恼等

　　crescendo 声音由弱渐强，达到最高值

　　keep sb. enchanted/keep sb. charmed 让某人陶醉

　　make sb. enchanted/charmed/spellbound让某人陶醉，着迷

　　be immersed in 对......着迷，沉迷

　　sth. filled the air 空气中弥漫着......

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　　解释How you feel about it　　As for how I felt about the performance, it was surely an unforgettable one, one with rich and vivid details I could savor in the future. But it was more than just a performance. It was also a chance for people to enter another world free of stress and worries, detaching themselves from the daily grind.

　　Language bits

　　rich details 丰富的细节

　　savor sth. 细细品味，仔细回味(the memory, music, book等)

　　be detached from 脱离......(如逃离现实，烦恼等)，也可以说detach oneself from sth.

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